Greg+P


 * In these edits, I bolded the areas that should be taken out and italicized the areas that should be edited/changed then underneath this little excerpt, I underlined what I think it should be.*****

MY NAME My name, Gregory, **it** means watchful one or alert. I don’t really know if I am what my name means. I can be watchful of my surroundings; I’m alert of almost everything that’s going on around me. So I guess my name fits me. I was almost named Kenneth, or Jeffrey. Kenneth means fire born, or good looking, so I guess the name would fit me, but not as well as Gregory does. **And** Jeffrey means peace, which could possibly fit me, but still Gregory fits me better, and I like it, I’ve grown fond of my name and I’m happy it's mine. Do I like my name enough to pass it to my son if I have one? No, I like it but I wouldn’t name my child after me. Its my name and yes other people have it but to me its my name and its what makes me unique.

SOMEONE YOU KNOW WELL Someone I know well would have to be my neighbor Liana. I know her like she’s my sister we even look alike a little. We know each other so well that we can tell when each other is down just by a text. I have known her since she was born, we grew up together. She tells me all of her secrets and I tell her all mine, I know I can trust her and she knows she can trust me. She would probably back me up with anything, cause I would do the same for her. I wouldn’t get mad at anything she tells me, I would only open my ears and listen. Liana and I are really good friends I think we plan on staying that way for a long time.